I think that sounds like a great plot line! Just keep writing it and the "amazing title" will emerge on its own if you don't have it already. As a reader, I find the vampires "cool" when they are more loving and less evil, only evil when they have to be... at least for the protagonist and his/her confidant. I don't know what your fight scenes look like, but it might be cool if one of the vampires could fly short distances, from one space to another? Good luck!
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